First time lyrics writing

So, this is my first time writing lyrics to a song. WOW! It was an eye opening experience, I never thought that I could be this artist in writing (SiaoZaBo). So this is what I had wrote and proposed to them.

It’s the day, the first step,

Anxiety filled me, then our eyes catch,

easiness swept through me,

I know we all felt the same.

Those awkward smiles had become friendlier ones

The string around us, thickens as time passes

What we had was short, but strong in our hearts

even we stopped saying goodbye, the memories are all inside

Simple talk, awkward smiles

Then comfort mocking and relax bearing

ever craving for the next meeting

How fast for us to be close acquaintance

In this Big city full of beautiful lights,

At times where my visions are blinded, you came by

took my hand and guide, 

it’s like we get to see tomorrow’s sunrise 

hand in hand marched towards the bright light 

The world before seems black and white,

But with you, they are all sparks and lights.

What we had was short, but strong in our minds

even we stopped saying goodbye, the memories are all still inside

Although in the end, only some parts are used but I'm still very happy :) And I get to sing my part ^.^
It's so obvious that I'm totally clueless during the first recording. I had no confidence in my voice and it kinda burdens the others too. So for next recording, i'm gonna work very very hard, mentally prepared myself for it. As this song is ours, every part of it had all those pieces of us in it. I really hoped that it will be a big success. 

I'm totally a newbie, still learning on how to do follow the melody and the beat, and singing (opps, I'm really bad at it). I kinda enjoy writing it and now planing to have a project with that sigui rui XDDD